Thursday 26 July 2018

Horsesome!

This week was our first week back at school, after the holidays, we wrote holiday slow writes about our holidays. We had to chose one moment in our holidays to write about. I wrote about when I did horse riding. My holidays were so fun!

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Hannah
    I like the descriptive language that you have used in this piece of writing Hannah. It certainly helps paint a picture in my mind about this holiday highlight.

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